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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
I really like how close you've shot this and how it feels more intimate that way. The fact that the red is so passionate seems to emphasise that a bit more too.
The angle isn't too bad, though I do feel that it is quite harsh, in a sense? Like I feel as if the point of view could be different... perhaps you could have tilted the camera higher, or moved down a bit yourself, so that we're not looking down, but looking sideways or even up, if you get what I mean?
The depth of field is brilliant, anyway. I am wary of what is happening with the brightness/lightness at the corners, though? That feels a bit dodgy, perhaps...
Other than that, not bad! I do like the square format and the additional effect of the water too. In some areas, it feels a bit burnt out, though?
Lovely stuff, either way.
I will comment on the other one soon (though it may take a few days