I really like how close you've shot this and how it feels more intimate that way. The fact that the red is so passionate seems to emphasise that a bit more too.
The angle isn't too bad, though I do feel that it is quite harsh, in a sense? Like I feel as if the point of view could be different... perhaps you could have tilted the camera higher, or moved down a bit yourself, so that we're not looking down, but looking sideways or even up, if you get what I mean?
The depth of field is brilliant, anyway. I am wary of what is happening with the brightness/lightness at the corners, though? That feels a bit dodgy, perhaps...
Other than that, not bad! I do like the square format and the additional effect of the water too. In some areas, it feels a bit burnt out, though?
Lovely stuff, either way.
I will comment on the other one soon (though it may take a few days )